Outline of paper 2:
Intro:
1.) Gradually lover the age over 5-7 yrs.
2.) Purchasing allowances
3.)Establish places to drink socially
Conclusion:
Thesis Sentences:
Paper #1: A person at the age of 18 can go to war and die for our country, smoke cigarettes, and vote.
Paper #2: If the government were to gradually lower the age over 5-7 years, put a quantity allowance on alcohol, and give younger people bars of their piers to go to that would encourage safe habits; then the drinkin age could be safely lowered and sustained.
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try to expand in your outline some of the finer points so that it transfers easily to your paper when you revise it - and think about the appeals and how they can be used in your paper
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